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Poem For Passing Drivers
- DOK (22nd Mar 2013 - 19:20:17)
On witnessing a car getting cross with a coach trying to navigate our tiny roundabouts in the square, this came to me (never done this before!)
Poem For Passing Drivers.
We know your very tired,
Been working very hard.
We know you want to get home,
Before dinner's slightly chard.
But we'd just like to ask you
For patience and great care.
When driving through our village
And especially our Square.
DOK
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Re: Poem For Passing Drivers
- Anon Pedant (22nd Mar 2013 - 22:18:44)
"You're" and "charred", otherwise very good.
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Re: Poem For Passing Drivers
- Dave (24th Mar 2013 - 20:36:23)
there is always one clever t---r i think its very good
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Re: Poem For Passing Drivers
- Anon Pedant (25th Mar 2013 - 14:13:38)
What's wrong with constructive criticism Dave? I didn't need to resort to using the word t****r did I?
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